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Feelings

  • Post published:February 5, 2020
  • Post category:AWWC / Poetry
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Rising above the lies

In a world full of troubles I lay

Will I get rays of light

Or only heartbreak and fight.

My heart beats fast and high.

My soul looks weak and sigh.

Will you be my angel nigh?

Will you make me laugh or cry?

I’m come from afar; can’t stop to try.

I’ve loved so much; I feel I’m high.

But is it love or lust?

Will it soar or rust?

Or just another moth

to show a stunt

Or make me truant?

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Will it be full of pain?

Or mixed with gain?

On my heart a lotta rain

With a lotta fain.

I’ve come to you plain

to ask in your heart; can I rein?

You’ve made me a fool of love.

My heart in my mouth; love

The light in my night; love

You are my might; love

My peace when I fright; love.

I’m not here to confuse

Nor to bemused you.

You could refuse

or better still refute.

But the truth still remains the truth.

And that you can not dispute.

THAT I LOVE YOU

Not for the way you look

Or the food you cook.

Nor the blessings you took

Or your foot in a book

but for the flow of love in a brook

If it were the look; the day I find another; better, would be the end.

If it were the cook; the day I eat another; better, would be the end.

If it were riches, they’ve got wings.

If it were intelligence, it could fade away.

But in all this, you’re uniquely unique and the singleton best for me.

My love for you is endless and timeless.

You’re clueless until you give me a chance to prove my fitness.

WILL YOU BE MY VAL?


Author: T-prince, 08135746001

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Bamstar

Keep it up

Victor

Thanks

Victor

Thanks

Khadddiii

Nice one dear

Victor

Thanks Card B

Waliyah

Wonderful… keep it up

Victor

Thanks

Bamatheology

Reading this triggered my love towards my angel

Odeolaj

Yes T-Prince I’ll be your val 🤔 but then I’m a guy 🤦🏽‍♂️🤦🏽‍♂️🤦🏽‍♂️. Good write up anyways keep it up and try to do more editing next time cause I can sight a few errors. Thanks for sharing this piece though I really love it

Habeeb

Nice one bro

Victor

Thanks

Mariam

Nice write up Victor…thumbs up👍

Sweet sis

I’ll be your Val.. Babylove🤗
Nice write up though

Victor

That’s true.
Thanks for this!
I’ll work more and I am sure the next one will be better.

Larry

Wow

Victor

Larry, I appreciate it.

Victor

I appreciate it, next edition will be better.

Victor

I hope it brings good fruit.
One love

Jane

Great💪💯🔥

Victor

Bamatheology, I wish you the Best🤗

unique

great

Mukhtar Harbey

Big ups bro!!! Cool

Victor

Sir, Harbey, I appreciate it

Joan

Nice one..

Victor

Thanks

Nelson

Great write up there! You’ve hitherto been inspirational to many souls. Keep the fire burning.

Victor

thanks.
I will.

Khadddiii

Awwn
Nice write up💓

Victor

Thanks

Ahmad

This is awesome

Francisca Chiamaka

This a wonderful piece, I’ve always known you to be an exceptional writer, Keep it up dear, you’ll go places

Victor

Amen.
I appreciate this!

Victoria

This…. Is wonderful keep it up more knowledge

Luna

I’mma be yh Val
Nice write up tho

Victor

Awwnnn
Thanks dear

Leena

Wow! I love this, keep it up!!!!!!!!

Victor

Thanks

Israel

Nice one bro
Greater heights sir

Victor

Thanks

Josh

Nice write up boss

Element

This is a nice poem. I pray those who read learn from it

Element

This is a nice poem.but i will not be your val

Victor

❤️💕😍

Aishat ojolowo

So lovely 😘😘😘
You garrit baby

Victor

Aishat, I always love your vibe😋

olliavision

A nice well and composed poem, just try keeping it up the sky is ur limit.

Victor

Amen!
I really appreciate your comment.

Lateef

The composure is amazing

Testimony

Nice one… Keep it up… More inspiration and knowledge

Victor

Testimony, I always love your vibe😋
Amen

Ishola nimotallahi eniola

This is awesome keep it up dear

Victor

Eniola, thanks a lot

Victor

Eniola, I appreciate it

Olamide

Nice one dear
Keep it up
May God continue to assist you

Victor

Amen.
Thanks for the good wishes

Dapo

Nice one

Atom

Nice one 💗

Atom

💙💙💙

Ewaade

Awwwwwnnnnn, this is so much amazing. You’ll write me a poem for i and my husband so I’ll read to his ears on my wedding day
In short, this poem is awesone

Victor

Let’s work something out.
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Shukrah

Nice one

Ibn Qamar

Nice write up Bro.
Keep it up, more ink to you pen

Victor

Amen o, more zeal!

Fasasi Ruqayyah Eniola

Fantastic….I really love this….keep on inking …..

AbdlQudus

Nice write up from the poet
More Grease to your elbow.

Tobi

Great write up

Temitope

Am not someone that believe love exist but this write up made me heart skipped. Like,its full of emotions. This got me down like seriously. Its beautiful

Victor

We will all find love and be alright😘

Abdulkareem Oyetunji Oyewole

Keep it up nice conposment Goodluck on that
God bless ✌✌

Lateef

Yeah, top notch

SAKARIYAH Ibrahim

Nice write up

Olamide

Nice one bro

Praise

This is a good write up.

How did you get to form it

Victor

Thanks
God is the source

Ayinla Niheematallah

Wow, this is really nice, more power to your elbow, the pen legend.

Victor

Thanks
I feel honoured

Adisa blessing

Excellent writeup victor
Keep growing in wisdom

Lateefah

This is a masterpiece!
Keep working hard, you are going places.

Decent

This is heart touching………….
Keep it up

Victor

Thanks

Lateef

Definitely

Aminat

This is very good
Keep it up

Victor

I will🤗

Onimasa

Bravo owolabi Victor, really love dis. Keep growing bro

Victor

Thanks a lot

Felix

It’s really a nice one dude, keep it up.

joah

Nice one T prince, keep it up

Oluwatobiloba

Keep it up man

Ibrahim

Nice one

victor

Great

uthman

Wow, great

esther

Nice one

esthet

Keep it up man

Zainab

That’s a good one