MOTHER

MOTHER

  • Post published:January 15, 2020
  • Post category:AWWC / Poetry

Oh my darling mother
Who aided my cross over
I swam in her river
And she was my feeder
Still my leader
Paid my teacher
Even while things were meagre

A standing ovation wouldn’t do for a consolation
You were no ordination but I, your creation
Regardless of any invention, they’ll be no invasion
Even in the congregation, I’ll still have you a motivation

Her sews came in rows
In my coats
Were roved boats
In my nose
She had sucked close
Her loads were my woes
She had sold all her soles
Just to pay for my dose
I’ll take loans for her colds

In this day
We celebrate your day
We say you shine like the day
May your going down be a nay
Just like the ray
You’ve penetrated our day
SO WE SAY
A HAPPY BIRTHDAY
MUMMY BRAY AND SHINE LIKE A RAY FOR ALL YOUR DAY
ITS YOUR DAY
SO WE SAY A HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Author: Odeolaj

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Victor

Great piece!

Taofeeqat

Boy yo nice write up

Bloiza

This write up is one of d best I ve read so far
Coming from d depth of d heart towards a mother.. It means so much.. I love it😊

Dapo

Nice one

aliyu Abdulrasheed

Your Comment Here… that’s nice

Abdulrasheed

Your comment here…. Awesome…Keep it up

Kelechi

Nice poet
Happy birthday Mummy Bray

Emmanuel

Waw… So nice i need to share this

Ayodeji

This is nice❤️

Nasirat

It’s very thoughtful

Mac Bounne

It really nice
But the coordination is not firm
Nice one bro

Comfort

I love this ❤️❤️

The love of my life

😍😍😍😍
So nice

Semilore

Brace up, dear!
Kudos on this.

Adesewa

Amazing👍👍👍👍👍

cassandra

Your Comment Here…wow, superb

Odeolaj

To all those who have commented their true mind I really do appreciate it… for you that didn’t post your true feelings 😕😕😕….pls if you truly appreciate this piece kindly do not leave without a comment …and as well ensure you post your true feelings sha …..Odeolaj cares

Adeyemi Jacob

Good job bro
Divine Inspirations in Jesus name

Faith

This is Beautiful, I love it

Bamstar

Nice post

Oladipupo

Superb

Brown

Wonderful

Tola

Wow so Inspiring..

Oyin

Weldone Mr Odelaj😉
Great piece!

Oluwafemi

What a great and motivative write up! Keep it up.💯

Abdulrahman

This is so inspiring

Ibn Qamar

Amazing.
More ink to your pen

Quadri

Wow… this is cool

Odeolaj

Thanks bro

Uchamma

Love each and every lines.
Learnt to appreciate my mom better.

Riches Ella

Nice

Hologu Daniel

This is really great.
Am happy for you for this.
U’ll for sure go places

Odeolaj

🙌🏿

Iretomiwa

Love this

Ajibade

Great,
Your pen speaks grate of your tongue odeolaj
I know u have more, yet to be read by me….
God bless u more m sure you will soar higher with these write ups.
One love. ❣️

Jane

Wow.. Great!. Keep it up.💪👏

Khadddiii

Nice one
Keep it up

Jaybee

Need no better line for my mum’s birthday, I love the rhythm..much love

Odeolaj

Thanks bro

Tinuke

Awwn I love this,you did a fabulous job.Keep it up Bro

Esther

Great job
Keep it on

Marvelous

This is really gud

Flourish

Nice one.. Keep up the good work

Theo

Not too good work more on yourself

Matthew

This is a very nice job bro ,it wonderful……

Precious

Wow…. it’s nice
Keep it up

Precious

Wow!!!😱😱😱
Though not a poet am convinced this is a magnificent and captivating piece💪💪💪. I love everything about the poem especially the rhymes😁😁. I believe in you bro the sky is your starting point👌👏.

Odeolaj

I don’t know if I know you but then I’m fucking blushing 😊 right now

Koyinsola

wow so amazing
Am really impressed buy dis poem and it’s so lovely
GREAT JOB

Ajoke

Fantastic job! Welldone sir
Anticipating for more

Muhammad Sobur

Memories and Melodies across the lines, the stanzas… Mom, Sweet Mom…
Kudos, great poet…

Khadddiii

Nice poem

Toyosi

Nice write up, keep it up it is a lovely poet

Nicky Vicky

Nice dose for a precious rose like my mother! Good job ola

Tomiwa Ajayi

👍

Sapphire

This is so beautiful 😍 I love this….

Ibirinoye Aishat Ayomide

Aesthetic ,this is best av come by , keep soaring higher

Taofeeq

this is really amazing, keep it up!

Aderonke

Lovely poem